Nathaly: April 15

April 15, 2012 by Nathaly D. No comments »

My AP English test went pretty horrible. I got 18 correct, which is pretty low. When I started my essay, I started with the open essay. I did not have too many problems with that essay. When I read the prose essay, I could not think of what to write about. I skipped it and started to write about the poetry essay. Then I was not in the mood to write and I was simply getting my thoughts out in an unstructured way. For the real exam I plan to study by reviewing the literary devices and going over the yellow book.

Something that is going good in my life is that I am still working hard to get where I want to be. I am not getting lazy. I am working hard in my program to do financial aid stuff to know where I want to go to college.

Chris: My View On AP Practice Test

April 15, 2012 by Chris No comments »

Overall, I felt that that AP Saturday was alright. I wasn’t able to get my essays done because of my lack of focus and my body pains. I feel that if it were the real test, I would have failed completely. I hope that when the test comes, everything will fall into place and I am able to do well. In the upcoming weeks, I know that I have to step it up to reach my goal. Hopefully, I don’t leave everything till the end.

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A great article about commas and grammar

April 12, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Grammar is not only about rules. It’s about communication. And grammar rules change.

Mr. Woo sent me this New York Times article that will deepen your knowledge and thinking about grammar. You’ll see that some of the “rules” I’ve taught you this year may change in the future. Other rules depend on your audience.

It’s all pretty neat. Definitely check out the article.

About grammar rules changing: Don’t worry. Nothing is changing before May 10. :)

One more thing: Check out this article — and other great things to read — in the sidebar under the heading, “Read this Now!”

More Student of the Week pics

April 12, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Sarai was a great choice for Student of the Week, don’t you think? (You should see her Mega-Quiz #1 score! She did great.)

Here are some pictures from the last couple SoWs. Enjoy!

Weekender, April 15

April 12, 2012 by Mr. Isero 1 comment »

Hi APers. Here is this weekend’s Weekender, due before 11 p.m. this Sunday.

Write a post on iseroma.com that addresses the following two questions:

1. How did your practice AP test go? How did you feel? What were your strengths? What were your weaknesses? How do you plan on studying the next three weeks before the real exam?

2. What great or funny things are happening in your life?

Good news: The mobile iseroma site is back up, so you should be able to post from your phone.

Remember: Be sure to click “2012 APers” as your category and include your name as a tag.

See you on Saturday at the front of the school at 8:00 a.m. sharp. Pretend it’s the actual test. Don’t be late.

Take this class from Yale!

April 11, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Don’t worry too much if you didn’t get accepted to Yale. You can still take a class with them beginning this summer!

I just found out about a great (and free) online American Studies course: Hemingway, Fitzgerald, and Faulkner.

In our AP English class, some of you read The Great Gatsby, but we didn’t touch two other very famous American authors: Ernest Hemingway and William Faulkner.

Go take a look at the syllabus and see if you’re interested! If you’re serious, maybe I’ll take the class with you. Even though the grade doesn’t matter, I bet I can beat you. :)

Note: Many colleges now offer free online classes (without credit). Check out Stanford, Berkeley, and MIT. (Berkeley is the best.)

Remember, don’t quit learning just because you’re graduating!

15 grammar goofs to avoid

April 8, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

APers, your grammar has improved so much this year, so now it’s time to push hard and to take care of your biggest (and worst) mistakes.

Check this list of 15 grammar goofs to avoid. Do you make any of them? Share your thoughts in the comments!

Essay of the Week, April 6

April 6, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

I have some bad news, APers.

I’m not giving out an “Essay of the Week” this week.

And it’s not because I’m not ready to give back your essays.

It’s just that I didn’t find an essay that is worthy of “Essay of the Week.”

I mean, there were some good essays. The finalists this week for Essay of the Week were Nathaly, Paulina, and J.C. They all had pretty good essays, but none of them were superb.

The bigger thing I wanted to say is that I don’t feel like you all really worked that hard on your essays this week. Sure, there were some of you that I felt worked pretty hard, but mostly, I was disappointed by your work ethic, your follow-through, your desire.

Learn from this, APers, and put in more energy into Grammar Week, which starts now!

Weekender, April 8

April 5, 2012 by Mr. Isero 13 comments »

Hi APers! This weekender is due before 11 p.m. this Sunday.

Next week, I go to the English 11 classes to talk to juniors about AP English.

What should I tell them?

Leave a comment (one paragraph) to this post.

Also, I want iseroma right now to stage a comeback, so write something there if you want.

Have a wonderful weekend.

APers, take the AP survey

April 4, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Hi APers. Please take the following survey! Thank you.

Photos from Me in a Minute

March 31, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Remember “Me in a Minute,” the way we introduced ourselves to each other? Yeah, it was in August, on the second day of school.

I just discovered the pics from that day. Here they are!

Advanced possessives from Grammar Girl

March 30, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

If you think you know about possessive apostrophes, this podcast from Grammar Girl will rock your world.

Grammar Girl says that possessive apostrophes are used not just when somebody possesses something. They’re also used when nouns are in possessive case.

If you’re serious about your grammar, check out the podcast.

 

The Awakening: Nightly Text #13 (Chs 37-39)

March 15, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Well, you made it. Here are your texts from the last reading assignment.

Possible Socratic Questions

Chavonni: So now that we know Robert did actually love Edna, do you still think he is the devil or does he symbolize something else in Ednas life?

Ellie: Edna presents herself as an independent strong woman but in the end she kills herself does that make her weak?

JC: From your point of view, looking through Edna’s, what do you think made her feel trapped/not free? Why?

D’Naya: Why did Edna Pontellier decide to kill herself?

Brenda: If love did not awaken Edna, why did Robert specifically awaken her?

David: In the last page, Edna hears her fathers voice and her sisters voice, why don’t you think she heard Roberts voice?

Esteffany: Was it Robert who awaken Edna or love? Explain.

Chris: How does Chopin’s characterization of Edna reflect her life?

Thoughts About the End of the Book

Kevin: I think Edna is very brave but extremely selfish. I hate the end of this book because she did not rise up instead she chose to not ride out her marriage. She brings pain to her children and died unhappy like it was the only thing to do. One thing I did like though is Robert. He did what was right as a man and let it go eventhough it may have hurt. He has respect for society, Leonce, and himself.

Leo: The end remind me the quote we analyze today. i realize she emphasize u cuz she is awaked not her choice. she is weak rather than strong.

Rashada: When Robert admits he fantasized about Edna becoming his wife and Mr. P setting Edna free, my heart literally stopped! It was so cute. It reminded me of the TITANIC for some reason. Edna realizes that she is still trapped though and feels she committed to societys expectation of her. She then commits suicide, and that was really shocking to me. I feel like Edna was willing to sacrifice her life but not her willpower!

Marco:  I think that her swimming into the water and just going and going symbolizes her freedom. Her dying from drowning to me in a way means that she is free at last.

Nathaly: I think the end could have been better. I wanted to know more about mr.p and y she decided to just walk into the water. I also don’t like the in all novels the women have to die to be free. Why could she just remain alive. however it was still a good ending because with symbolism she was really free.

Sarai: I was really excited because the end was.comming. I was a little confused but then I was analyzing it and it was easier to understand. I really didnt like the ending. I wished it would of been more dramatic or something good happened. The book was good tho.

Monae: It was a bit much. I wasn’t expecting her to go out the way she did

Pauline: I think Edna walked into the sea to die and be free. She is basically showing how the life of a women was during the times. Women had to take those measures in order to be free. It was tragic and sad because that was reality.

Steph: Itx boring.. I was think something more dramtica towards the end… But she swims endlessly.

Mercedes:  I thought it was sad! But thats the way she was able to set herself free. I enjoyed the book and the way it ended.

Nate:  I think the booked ended off well because she ends up growing power in herself and that is shown by her going out and swimming in the cold beach water.

More Hamlet footage

March 14, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

Hey APers. I finally got around to uploading a little bit of the video from your Hamlet productions.

Take a look at Antonio’s intro and then Hamlet, Act I, Scene 1. Enjoy!

The Awakening: Nightly Text #12

March 14, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

One good way to practice for a Socratic is to collect excellent, thought-provoking excerpts. That’s what you did last night. Here are your quotes:

Chavonni: Only you no one but you it was you who awoke me last summer out of a life long stupid dream.

Esteffany: “In some way you seem to me like a child, Edna. You seem to act without certain amount of reflection which is necessary in this life.”

Mercedes: ”She felt like some new-born creature, opening its eyes in a familiar world that it had never known.”

Nathan: A vision-a transcendently seductive vision of a Mexican girl arose before her. She writhed with a jealous pang. She wondered when he would come back.

Ellie: ”There was no despondency when she fell asleep that night; nor was there hope when she awoke in the morning.” This quote meant a lot to me because it showed me that she had lost all hope. For a second, she was not the brave independent woman who left her husband. She was weak and alone, and she knew that. That is the moment she lost hope when she realized she needed Robert.

Monae: I’ve been seeing the waves and the white beach.

Sarai: The one I chose was “was she such a one?” I chose this one because this is when Edna and Robert are talking about his time in Mexico. This was interesting because Edna was wondering who the girl was who gave Robert the pouch. I think she wondered because he still has feelings for him. If she didnt care I don’t think she would have asked. When she said “such one” I think she ment like another one, another girl he met who is probably an older women.

Carmen: ”‘He loves you, poor fool. If she could but get that conviction firmly fixed in her mind, what mattered about the rest? I feel as if she is so stuck on the thought of a happy ending to the point where she does not realize reality which is that her and Robert can not be together.

Stephanie: ”Now you know” he said, “now you know what i have been fighting aganist since last summer at Grand Isle; what drove me away and ddrove me back again.”

Brenda: She answered her husband with friendly evasiveness- not with any fixed design to misleas him only because all sense of reality had gone out of her life; she had abandoned herself to Fate, and awaited the consequences with indifference. (XXXV) E. Is now being passive, not to anyone but to time and fate. She will see what Destiny has for her.

D’Naya: Late in the afternoon she sought refuge with mademoiselle reisz, and stayed there alone, waiting for her, feeling a kind of repose invade Her with the very atmosphere of the shabby, unpretentiou little room.

Chris: Her seductive voice, together with his great love for her, had enthralled his sense, had deprived him of every impulse but the longing to hold her and keep her.

Marco: There are some people who leave impressions not so lasting as the imprint of an oar upon the water.

Antonio: ”I am destined to see you only by accident.”

Pauline: ”She put her hand up to his face and pressed his cheek against her own. The action was full of love and tenderness. He sought her lips again. Then he drew her down upon the sofa beside him and held her hand in both of his.

Dezmond: ”I am no longer Mr. Pontillier’s possessions to dispose of or not. I give myself where I choose. If he were to say, ‘Here, Robert, take her and be happy she is yours,’ I should laugh at you both.”

Wendy: The best quote from tonight’s reading is, “all sense of reality had gone out of her life; she had abandoned herself to Fate, and awaited the consequences with indifference” (160). This quote demonstrates and summurizes Edna’s change. It describes her new life and the freedom she is slowly learning to live with.

Nathaly: ”…all since of reality had gone out of her life; she had abandoned herself to Fate, and awaited the consequences with indifference”

Kevin: Ikkgbm V2ZXIga2 5ldyB5b3UgaW4geW 91ciBob21lLC IgaGUgcmVtYXJr ZWQuICJJIGFtI GdsYWQgeW 91IGRpZCBub 3QiLiBJdCB pcyBzYXlpbmcgcm9iZXJ0IG5ldmVyIHNlZW4g. (Yes, that’s what he wrote.)

The Awakening: Nightly Text #11 (Chs 31-33)

March 13, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

I’m happy to report that I received the most texts last night — 20 — since the beginning of the unit. But the bad news is that David, who was undefeated, forgot to do his text! The only undefeated people now are Antonio, Nathaly, Stephanie, and Pauline. (Yes, three of the four are Isero Advisees!)

What does Edna think of her pigeon-house? What were the disadvantages and advantages? What does Mr. P think?

Nate:  Edna thinks of the house as a place that she enjoys. The disadvantage is that it is small like a house for pigeons and advantages are that it is her place of peace. Mr P accepted the place.  The home also gave her a bit of peace by allowing her to understand the meaning of life.

Rashada: I think Edna finds the pigeon house a place where she can be free from Mr.P. She feels like she is free when she’s there and that she can do as she pleases with Robert.

Pauline: Edna thinks that her pigeon-house is amazing and it pleases her. She is fond of her house and it seems as though that is the only thing that keeps her happy. A disadvantage is that she wants to be like the pigeon, free. Something new is awakening inside her that could affect her family and her relationship with her husband.

Nathaly:  Edna is pleased with her house. Even though her house is small she is able to find strength and expand spiritually. Mr. p disproves of her moving into the pigeon house.

When Mr. P gets his wife’s letter about the house, what is his attitude? What does he do, and why?

Steph:  Mr. P’s attitude about the house is that he is sad that his wife wants to leave the house. After he receives that letter, he begged Edna to reconsider. But he remembers about how Edna’s “whimisical” and lets Edna have her way.

Wendy: When Mr. P gets his wife’s letter about the house, he got angry but not because his wife was leaving him but because he was afraid that his reputation and position in society was going to be damaged. As a consequence, what he decided to do was to remodel the house where they lived so that people could think that is why Edna left. He wants to maintain his good reputation. This clearly demonstrates that Mr. P does not love Edna and all he cares about is a good title and what people think about him. 

Sarai:  When Edna wrote to her husband about abandoning her home he wrote back dissaproving with her decision. She gave him explinations and he was still not accepting 10:19 PM

Sarai Silvestre:  When Edna wrote to her husband about abandoning her home he wrote back dissaproving with her decision. She gave him explanations and he was still not accepting it. He told her to think about what other people would say about her leaving. Since Edna is like a trophy to him he doesn’t want people to know that she is leaving him. He was also thinking about his financial integrity.

When Edna goes to visit her children, what is her reaction? Why do you think she reacts that way?

Mercedes:  When Edna visits her children she is happy & thinks about them a lot after the visit. I think she feels this way because she finally has time to herself which is allowing her to grow. Edna is becoming grateful for others around her since she is starting to become happy & free.

Monae: To me it seemed like she was distant from her kids and I think deep down she felt bad that she was lusting away her time thinking it was love and she felt in denial about not really being a mother.

Leo: She hugs them tight. I think the reason is that she is unconsciously concern about her children’s future. Those children could be the last big road block that hinder Edna from seeking freedom. Also I think she feels a little bit guilt to her children because she was not taking good care of them and not being good mother that fits social expectation.

Marco:  She is happy to see her children because she hasn’t seen them in a long time. They catch up with what they haven’t experienced together yet.

What does Madame Ratignolle tell Edna? Do you agree with her? Explain.

Dezmond:  Madame Ratignolle tells Edna that she’s been acting like a child. Yes I absolutely agree with her because Edna is rash. She does whatever she wants as long as it benefits her.

Chris: Madame ratignolle tells Edna that she has a lonely lifestyle where she is disconnected from others. She also says that alcee’s intentions could ruin her  name. In my opinion, she is right because Edna is tempted by other men. This pushes her into a place where she is very alone, due to her inner conflicts of being independent and free.

When Edna asks Robert to stay for dinner, what’s his COMPLEX reaction? And why do you think he reacts that way?

Brenda:  Robert hesitated on eating dinner with Edna because he made an excuse about having to see his mother. He had been avoiding her, especially being alone with her. He’s in love with her, but she’s married. Once he saw her sad face, he couldnt bare to see her like that and stayed for dinner.

Carmen:  He rejects Edna to come into her house which makes her extremely sad yet later he feels bad and comes in. I think he reacts this way because he is no longer interested, he liked Edna at grand isle not the Edna from New Orleans. He does not truly know that Edna.

Antonio: Robert at first doesnt want to stay but then he sees edna’s pitiful reaction and he is compelled to stay out of concern.

 

 What does Robert think of Arobin, and how do you know?

Kevin: I believe Robert thinks Arobin is a prick and is jealous of him. Robert does not like Arobin because he thinks he is taking Edna. I KNOW because I think so and I read.

Esteffany: Robert is jealous of Arobin, he dislikes the man. He believes that Edna has true feelings for him and he cannot take such thing. He knows that he is charming and all but does not want to see Edna fall in love with him.

Ellie:  Robert thinks that Arobin is important to Edna. In their conversation in chapter XXXIII Robert discovers a picture of Arobin and becomes jealous. I know  this because Robert questions why she still holds on to it and he asks why she never told him about Arobin. At the end he flings Arobin’s picture to the  side, indicating that the picture bothered him especially because it was in her possession.

JC:  He thinks Edna is basically “cheating” on him with Arobin and he thinks that because of the photo of Arobin that he finds.

Quizzards: March 8

March 12, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

There were fewer Quizzards this time, but it’s wonderful to see who is really stepping things up, making sure to put in consistent study, and reading The Awakening closely.

Congratulations to the five Quizzards: Wendy, Chavonni, Chris, Nathaly, and Ellie!

            

Essay of the Week: “Forgotten Childhood”

March 12, 2012 by Mr. Isero No comments »

I am very proud to announce that Nathaly is the winner of Essay of the Week. Nathaly is on a roll! After winning G of the Week for our last essay, she’s continuing to step things up on her writing. I’m truly proud of her. Please read her essay for sophistication of language, excellent choice of evidence, and solid analysis. Feel free to leave comments.

Forgotten Childhood

“Flame Heart” is a poem written by the Jamaican writer, Claude McKay, who tries to remember his past, but has some trouble. The author only remembers the part of his childhood that makes him happy. The author feels nervous about his forgotten childhood, but does not lose hope by using direct diction, realistic imagery, and descriptive detail to reconstruct his memories of his childhood.

The author chooses words to provide evidence of what is happening in his memory and how he feels nervous about losing his childhood. The author has forgotten about events in the past ten years. To emphasize his nervousness, the author writes that he has “forgotten” (1) so much in his “brief” (2) years. He “cannot” (12) remember his “passion” (27), which occurs in so little time. The only thing he can “remember”(9) is a time in “December” (10) when he was “happy” (29). He feels the need to remember the “special” (5) moments in his life when his “thrilled” body fills with “joy” (23). All the author wants out of life are joyous memories to cherish. He conveys the message that even though he forgets so much in so little time, he can still be happy with the one specific memory that makes him content. His diction provides positivity over the negative outcome.

Realistic imagery shows the author recalling events in his past to reconstruct memories. The author provides many descriptive images that he argues he has forgotten. The author says, “I have forgot/ what time the purple apples come to juice..”(1-2) and “I have forgot the special, startling season/ of the pimento’s flowering and fruiting” (5-6). The author forgets the remarkable moments in his life that he wants to relive in his mind. He is trying to remember the most beautiful thing in nature, which is flourishing as time passes. He relates to the fruits and flowers to his childhood; just as the flowers and fruits grow and mature, so does he. Then he says, “I have forgotten- strange- but quiet remember/ The poinsettia’s red, blood-red in warm December” (19-20). When the author feels like he has forgotten too much from his past, he assures himself by repeating the memory of the poinsettia that engraves his memory. He does not want to let go of his childhood. The author constantly recalls his known memory after he conveys his forgotten memories.

The author provide specific imagery to describe the events, but does not provide detail about the timing of the events. Descriptive detail is put into the poem to emphasize the time in which all the forgotten events take place. He says, “What month brings me shy forget-me-not” (4) and “What time of the year the ground doves brown the fields” (7). He also says, “What weeks, what months, what time of the mild year/ We cheated school to have our fling at tops?” (21-22). The author does not forget the what, but the when. He does not have trouble knowing what is happening, but when it occurs. The author describes all that is happening, but simultaneously cannot express the time that any of it occurs. Detail mentions desire for remembering more blissful moments by asking himself clarifying questions about his past. He then states “Oh, some I know!” (25) because for him the most important thing is remembering what joyous events happen, rather than when it happens. The author’s positive attitude overcome his oblivious attitude.

Claude McKay remembers certain events in his life, which gives him hope to reconstruct the rest of the memories that have brought him joy in life. The author is able to identify what he has forgotten and remembered through diction. The imagery conveys a sense of remembrance from all he has seen. Detail goes more in depth with what he truly desires. Positive emotions relate to the memories that the mind will retain.

Esteffany: Love and Marriage

March 11, 2012 by Esteffany C. No comments »

I decided to read the article on the short story, “The Story of an Hour.”

I was interested because this story is different from everything I have read before. It is very ironic and complex.  The article was about the significance and matter of marriage.

Many years ago marriage was forced, it wasn’t “true love” like many believe. Women weren’t happy and for their entire life weren’t satisfied with their lives. The article states that many women might have “loved” their husband but did not want to be with them.

That is sad because like in the short story and true life events, the wife is happy to hear their husband are dead when in reality them should be miserable or something. Both in The Awakening and the short story, the author writes about the negatives of marriage. It is sad, but true. However, I still believe in love:)

Monae: Kony 2012

March 11, 2012 by Monae M. 1 comment »

I read an article about this “Kony 2012″ publicity. I saw it a lot on walls, instagram, buses, and at the hospital. It’s informing people about this crazy genocide that’s happening in Uganda.

It’s this guy named Kony who’s kidnapping children and drugging them with cocaine and gunpowder and making them kill their parents as well as guardians. This man has been doing this for years and they make the “Kony 2012″ election sign to promote this issue that’s happening in hopes that someone will help stop Kony from destroying Uganda.

I thought this was interesting how Americans know about this but don’t do anything when it comes to situations like this. America is quick to go attack a innocent country for having nuclear weapons (no evidence to back it up), but they can sit consciously and not stop innocent people being killed and bullied by a grotesque man.

They take out billions out of my education for pointless warfare, and can’t even acknowledge a cry for help. It angers me and saddens me because America is very hypocritical and deceiving.